Kia ora! I am a year 7 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Olivia you've done some interesting writing and your photos were so believable they made me hungry! To make your work Better than before (BTB) I suggest you try to use a capital 'I' when writing about yourself and try not to write to be continued unless you intend to finish the story. Keep up the good work Olivia, Ms Peters.
Kia ora Olivia you've done some interesting writing and your photos were so believable they made me hungry! To make your work Better than before (BTB) I suggest you try to use a capital 'I' when writing about yourself and try not to write to be continued unless you intend to finish the story. Keep up the good work Olivia, Ms Peters.
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