WALT: Write a narrative story based off of our school trip to the Adrenaline adventure waterpark. This week for writing our teacher (Miss Cutler) gave us a task to write a narrative story based off of a school trip we had on Friday last week.
Once upon a time, there was a girl named Julia, Julia, her class, and 2 other classes went on a school trip to a waterpark.
On the morning of that day, everyone came to school with their stuff ready, Julia had brought one of her anime pillows (she's a big anime fan/weeb) and everyone began wanting it, when the time for them to go came, everyone got on the bus and began singing to the music playing on the bus.
Everything was fine until they got to the park, Julia could smell something fishy, literally but the park supervisors said that there was absolutely nothing to worry about.
All the kids lined up in rows of 10 to get their life-jackets while the lifeguards spoke about some rules.
After a while, Julia began to lose her suspense until a huge amount of bubbles started showing next to her.
“GET OUT!” yelled one of the lifeguards from the shore, suddenly everyone flew out of the water like birds fleeing from predators.
Julia’s legs were tangled in the oxygen plants that seemed to be pulling her under, as she tried to escape, a big fish with razor-sharp teeth and scales rose from the water and swallowed up Julia.
Years later she re-appeared in her hometown and told everyone a petrifying story of what had happened…
To Be Continued…
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